I think that this is the best story I have written this year because it has a lot of detail and describing words.
A Snake Mistake In a hay field near a barn lived a pine snake named Scale. He slithered over to the barn. he saw a muddy pond. He slithered to it. Scale thought there were frog eggs in it. He went in. He struggled. Scale tried to get out. Scale could not get out. If Scale did not get out soon he would die. Scale thought about his good times. he was wondering why he had done this. Scale saw no eggs in there. Scale was dying. he was scared that he would be trapped! All of a sudden he found an EXIT!! Scale saw that it was a rocky exit. He got out just in time. A farmer was walking towards the pond to replace the rocks that were weak and he didn’t see Scale and he accidentally kicked Scale back into the water. Scale held his breath until took his last breath and all Scale saw was white. Scale had died. No one knows where he is or what happened to him. Once in the middle of nowhere there was a house that was a haunted house with 15 ghosts. They have been haunting the house for 40 years. The people there couldn’t move until the ghost didn’t haunt the house anymore.
A family lived there on their vacation. Nobody was afraid except…Dad. He had brick and steel doors and windows in the house.the kids bedroom and the kitchen, the living room were protected because they didn’t want the ghosts to come in. The doors were sealed and so were the windows. The ghosts tried to get in but they got frustrated because they couldn’t get in. The ghosts moved to a different house and the Dad and the other family members finished their vacation. Jellyfish have no brain or heart. They can glow in the dark. A group of jellyfish are called a "smack", "bloom", or "swarm." I think that's pretty silly! A jellyfish can paralyze its prey.
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J.M.I am 7. I like to write! |