I think that this is the best story I have written this year because it has a lot of detail and describing words.
A Snake Mistake
In a hay field near a barn lived a pine snake named Scale. He slithered over to the barn. he saw a muddy pond. He slithered to it. Scale thought there were frog eggs in it. He went in. He struggled. Scale tried to get out. Scale could not get out. If Scale did not get out soon he would die. Scale thought about his good times. he was wondering why he had done this. Scale saw no eggs in there. Scale was dying. he was scared that he would be trapped! All of a sudden he found an EXIT!! Scale saw that it was a rocky exit. He got out just in time. A farmer was walking towards the pond to replace the rocks that were weak and he didn’t see Scale and he accidentally kicked Scale back into the water. Scale held his breath until took his last breath and all Scale saw was white. Scale had died. No one knows where he is or what happened to him.
A Snake Mistake
In a hay field near a barn lived a pine snake named Scale. He slithered over to the barn. he saw a muddy pond. He slithered to it. Scale thought there were frog eggs in it. He went in. He struggled. Scale tried to get out. Scale could not get out. If Scale did not get out soon he would die. Scale thought about his good times. he was wondering why he had done this. Scale saw no eggs in there. Scale was dying. he was scared that he would be trapped! All of a sudden he found an EXIT!! Scale saw that it was a rocky exit. He got out just in time. A farmer was walking towards the pond to replace the rocks that were weak and he didn’t see Scale and he accidentally kicked Scale back into the water. Scale held his breath until took his last breath and all Scale saw was white. Scale had died. No one knows where he is or what happened to him.