I think that in this story I used describing words. I also had a beginning, middle and ending. My story had a problem and solution. Once there was a dragon who lived in the dark, dark deep woods. His name was Valco and he was a nice dragon but he had no friends. He was nineteen years old.
That morning when he woke up all of the dragons were slapping each other on the back with their tails. Then they ran over to Valco and said, “Can we be your friends?” “Yes! Yes! You can, of course.” gasped Valco. But one dragon didn’t come over because he hated Valco. His name was Ratty. When Valco and Ratty were little dragons Valco wasn’t nice to Ratty and that is why Ratty hated Valco. “Hey! Why can’t all of you come over here so I can tell you secrets about Valco?” Ratty yelled. All of the dragons shouted, “NO!” Valco did not remember anything that had ever happened to Ratty. “Do you remember, when we were little that you were mean to me?” asked Ratty. “Umm.” said Valco. “That was long ago and i don’t really remember.” said Valco. “I’m so sorry if I hurt your feelings.” cried Valco. Ratty said sorry too and finally they all got along and at the end of the day they played tag together. |
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