Suddenly Yoda whipped out his light saber. Then he pushed off the ground and flew into the air. Then he soared in an arc. His light saber pointed right at Darth Vader. Then there was a sound of breaking metal and the blade of Darth Vader’s light saber fell off. Yoda flicked his wrist and in one swift powerful movement he sliced Darth Vader’s head off.
Yoda put put his light saber back in his belt. Since he had killed Darth Vader there was nothing to fear… or so he thought. He went out the hole in the tree and started walking in the direction of the Ewok camp. Just when he was starting to feel comfortable he heard whirring sound. He looked in front of him. Then he looked in back of him and there it was, a Hailfire Droid. The first thing he did was estimate the laser cannons. He came up with the number 300. Then his brain made a connection and he realized that was the number of lasers that had almost hit him. hen he knew it! This was the Hailfire Droid that had shot at him earlier.
Yoda put put his light saber back in his belt. Since he had killed Darth Vader there was nothing to fear… or so he thought. He went out the hole in the tree and started walking in the direction of the Ewok camp. Just when he was starting to feel comfortable he heard whirring sound. He looked in front of him. Then he looked in back of him and there it was, a Hailfire Droid. The first thing he did was estimate the laser cannons. He came up with the number 300. Then his brain made a connection and he realized that was the number of lasers that had almost hit him. hen he knew it! This was the Hailfire Droid that had shot at him earlier.
I think that I am using more describing words and working hard to describe action.