Chapter 1
One day, on the Death Star, Darth Vader was planning to attack the Jedi named Yoda on the moon of Endor. Endor was the tree covered moon on the edge of the galaxy. Yoda was stranded on Endor when his spaceship blew up in a big fight between the Sith and the Jedi. Darth Vader decided to fly to Endor and attack Yoda, in the nighttime so that Yoda would not see him.
Meanwhile, Yoda was trying to find the Ewok camp. Yoda thought that the Ewoks might fly him back to Geonosis. He climbed up a hill. In the distance he spotted smoke and he could hear loud crashes and booms. Then, over the racket he heard a distinctive sound of a lightsaber and it was very, very close. That could only mean one thing. it meant either a Sith or a Jedi. He looked around. Then he saw it! A red lightsaber in the trees. Then he knew it. It was a Sith and he was getting closer.
Suddenly a chain of lightning shot out of the woods and hit a tree. CRASH!! The tree fell down only centimeters away from Yoda. Behind the tree was an unmistakable figure in a black robe. His eyes were rimmed with red and he had a lightsaber in both hands. It was Darth Sidious. Suddenly about 300 turbo lasers shot over Yoda’s head! As the lasers streamed past, filling the sky with streaks and flashes of red, Yoda ran as fast as he could into the woods. When he finally stopped running he found himself in front of a big hollow tree with a small hole in it. It was just big enough for Yoda to fit through. Yoda decided it was time to go to bed so he crawled through the hole and into a sort of cavern like room with carved walls and a high roof which was the top of the tree. Yoda laid down because he was very exhausted. So in a few minutes he was fast asleep.
All of a sudden Yoda heard a faint buzzing and jerked awake to the terrible sight of a red lightsaber right above his head.
I think that I showed better writing because I edited my story and used many describing words.
Meanwhile, Yoda was trying to find the Ewok camp. Yoda thought that the Ewoks might fly him back to Geonosis. He climbed up a hill. In the distance he spotted smoke and he could hear loud crashes and booms. Then, over the racket he heard a distinctive sound of a lightsaber and it was very, very close. That could only mean one thing. it meant either a Sith or a Jedi. He looked around. Then he saw it! A red lightsaber in the trees. Then he knew it. It was a Sith and he was getting closer.
Suddenly a chain of lightning shot out of the woods and hit a tree. CRASH!! The tree fell down only centimeters away from Yoda. Behind the tree was an unmistakable figure in a black robe. His eyes were rimmed with red and he had a lightsaber in both hands. It was Darth Sidious. Suddenly about 300 turbo lasers shot over Yoda’s head! As the lasers streamed past, filling the sky with streaks and flashes of red, Yoda ran as fast as he could into the woods. When he finally stopped running he found himself in front of a big hollow tree with a small hole in it. It was just big enough for Yoda to fit through. Yoda decided it was time to go to bed so he crawled through the hole and into a sort of cavern like room with carved walls and a high roof which was the top of the tree. Yoda laid down because he was very exhausted. So in a few minutes he was fast asleep.
All of a sudden Yoda heard a faint buzzing and jerked awake to the terrible sight of a red lightsaber right above his head.
I think that I showed better writing because I edited my story and used many describing words.